Before readers share the article widely, please fix the double wording, where you repeat a few paragraphs. Look for "gins up support for war..." to "depopulation is essential" and "live with one another." These paragraphs repeat at end of the article.
It may be a mechanical problem, but detracts from credibility.
Thanks for the feedback. IThe latest version of the article is always on the website https://moneycircus.substack.com but I am seeking a second pair of eyes. As a journalist it is never good for the reporter to edit his own work.
I still do from time to time.
Before readers share the article widely, please fix the double wording, where you repeat a few paragraphs. Look for "gins up support for war..." to "depopulation is essential" and "live with one another." These paragraphs repeat at end of the article.
It may be a mechanical problem, but detracts from credibility.
Thanks for the feedback. IThe latest version of the article is always on the website https://moneycircus.substack.com but I am seeking a second pair of eyes. As a journalist it is never good for the reporter to edit his own work.